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Post by The Thinker on May 24, 2006 12:30:33 GMT -5
Here you can post comments or reviews on the story 'The Alien Invasion of Earth which I am writing. All opinions and suggestions are welcome.
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Post by Dominic Smith on May 24, 2006 12:43:22 GMT -5
It's great so far, can't wait for chapter two, keep up the good work  |
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Post by The Thinker on May 24, 2006 12:44:20 GMT -5
It's great so far, can't wait for chapter two, keep up the good work Thanks! And I will do. |
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Post by The Thinker on May 27, 2006 6:14:55 GMT -5
Just a note, there aren't that many references to alien invaders yet in the story as you may have noticed. But be patient my friends, I'll add them in as I write chapter four but in the meantime, enjoy what's there...   P.S. I've started many stories in my life. For once I might just get round to finishing one. HA HA! ;D |
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Post by Dominic Smith on May 27, 2006 7:00:52 GMT -5
Just a note, there aren't that many references to alien invaders yet in the story as you may have noticed. But be patient my friends, I'll add them in as I write chapter four but in the meantime, enjoy what's there... It's shaping up well, loooking forward fro the next chapter P.S. I've started many stories in my life. For once I might just get round to finishing one. HA HA! ;D I know the feeling ;D |
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Post by The Thinker on May 28, 2006 4:07:24 GMT -5
When I started writing this story, what I had in mind was sort of Romeo and Juliet meet the Invaders from Mars. That idea gradually developed into a Doctor Who story which features my favourite Doctor, the Fourth as played by Tom Baker. Now there's a piece of trivia! |
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Post by The Thinker on May 28, 2006 9:28:20 GMT -5
Oh yes I just wanted to say this, I thought I'd use here as a little update notification platform too. Still, keep posting your thoughts on what I'm doing. It's a work in progress. |
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Post by The Thinker on Jun 15, 2006 9:59:00 GMT -5
I'm beginning to write Chapter Seven. Although the story may be a little slow paced at the moment, I promise you it'll pick up from here! |
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Post by The Thinker on Jun 18, 2006 11:50:20 GMT -5
Just added onto Chapter Seven now.
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Post by The Thinker on Jun 28, 2006 10:01:20 GMT -5
Starting chapter eight!
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Post by The Thinker on Jul 7, 2006 3:36:28 GMT -5
Just added on more to the story. I'm afraid you're going have to excuse some bits, I'm not good at writing romantic scenes. However if you've got any suggestions, don't hesitate to PM me! JLD. |
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Post by davisonera on Jul 15, 2006 6:34:43 GMT -5
It's good this you know. You should be in RTD's job.
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Post by The Thinker on Jul 15, 2006 8:18:49 GMT -5
Thank you, but I think there a few inconsistencies in it. However not to worry, I can always do some modifications when I've finished. But I'm glad you two like it. |
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Post by The Thinker on Aug 5, 2006 3:43:36 GMT -5
Just finished off chapter nine. Chapter ten coming soon.
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Post by The Thinker on Aug 7, 2006 4:41:50 GMT -5
Finished Ten, beginnig eleven.
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