Nightmare Earth and the return

[thevalyard01]

hope you like it.

Nightmare Earth and the return

Thousands of years ago the planet Timkalak split in two. Each half drifting to each side of the universe. Now they have come back. To the planet that split them. The blue planet. Earth!

A time of peace on Earth in the year 229,000. Nothing had happened in one thousand years. The human race had spread through out most of the universe. But what nobody expected was for Timkalak to come back for revenge.

The TARDIS was pulled down a tractor beam into a space station. The Doctor and Rose stepped out to be greeted by a man and woman. They didn’t say anything but walked into a dark room. People sat in rows and watched the Doctor has he came in.
“The Doctor and his friend may be seated.” a woman in a white robe said.
“Atleast they seem friendly.” whispered Rose as she sat in a chair.

A shadow covered the Earth as Timkalak arrived.

The lights in the space station room came on and the Doctor stood up. His face filled with horror
“Who are they Doctor.” Rose asked with a worried look.
“ Time Lords!”

All over Earth people were dying as missiles bombarded the Earth.. Then the planet went dead as all its energy was pulled right into the two halves of Timkalak, making them join once again. The joining sent a shockwave that shattered buildings on earth.

The Time Lord space station started moving and disappeared into the time vortex.
“But how are you alive. I killed you.” the doctor asked. Still confused.
“ The high council sent a lone TARDIS with two time lords in it. While in the vortex it skipped a time track and landed in its own future. What they saw was terrible. You had destroyed all time lords that ever existed. When they came back they warned the high council and this station was sent out. Here we stayed until it was safe.” replied the judge. An old man in a green robe and an orange crown.
“Why did you bring me here.” the Doctor asked
“Earth is in danger. The planet Timkalak has become whole again and is setting out to destroy the universe. We want you to save Earth” the judge explained.
“What happened to non-intervention?”
“We still live by that. But Timkalak is a danger to the entire universe. So it must be stopped.” Before the Doctor and Rose could respond, the judge pushed a button and they appeared in the TARDIS.
“What was that?” asked Rose.
“They were the Time Lords. My people.”
“I thought they were destroyed?”
“So did I”

Tanks, helicopters and other military vehicles sped down the streets of London, dodging missiles and other things. The TARDIS materialised and the Doctor and Rose came out. Looking at the wreckage, Rose looked up in horror. She saw the dark red shape of Timkalak covering the sky. A missile hit the ground 10 feet away from them and the explosion ripped through Rose. All that could be heard was her screaming.

[thevalyard01]

right i decided to post the second chapter of this story. there is another 4 left. can some comment on the story so i know what to make better for your reading pleasure

war and how to stop it.

Inside the TARDIS the injured Doctor pulled the unconscious Rose inside and tried to revive her. The explosion had injured her and was near death.
“come on Rose don’t die on me.” he gave her mouth to mouth and she jumped up in fear.
“what happened.” she asked. Coughing uncontrollably.
“you almost died”
“well you saved me. that’s good.”
“you stay here. I’m going to see what’s going on.” He went to the monitor and saw the city come crumbling down. When he saw the disaster he dematerialised and went to the countryside.

On Timkalak a powerful laser started powering up. A huge ball of energy formed in between four walls.

The Doctor and Rose came out and saw the state of London. It was destroyed. Smoke came from the city and fires burned but it was quiet, except for the explosions over the hill behind them. Military planes flew over head, Rose could see Earth ships attacking Timkalak. All being destroyed as they did their best.
“This is hell.” Rose said. Crying as she saw the destruction. “How did all this happen. Why is that planet attacking Earth?”
“One thousand years ago a war happened between Earth and Timkalak. The outcome was Timkalak was split in two. Each half going to each side of the universe. Looks like they came back for revenge.” They went into the TARDIS and headed to Timkalak, hoping to make peace.

The Doctor stepped out and saw the red sky of Timkalak, Earth ships were attacking the city a couple of miles away but they all died. They were both grabbed by two kalanians and taken to the city.

In the city the Doctor was strapped to a bed. Rose was put in a cell.
“ Who are you?” a voice boomed from nowhere. The Doctor looked around but didn’t see anything, then saw something strange. There was shadows in the corner when there was nothing to make them. “Who are you?”
“I’m the Doctor. Where are you?”
“I am the Shadow. I am one with the shadows.”
“How very nice.” the Doctor replied. The Shadow moved towards the door when a soldier ran. He looked humanoid but was made of light.
“Shadow lord. Our ships have failed. The humans are pushing back.” the Shadow lord went below the soldier and started moving up his legs. Covering his entire body. He jumped into his mouth and he blasted to pieces. The Shadow then returned to the corner.
“That’s a nice little trick you’ve got there.” the Doctor said with a smile. “It looked like you knew what to do.”
“How long to the lasers ready?” asked the Shadow.
“ Three minutes lord.”
“good. Take the Doctor and his companion to the observation room. I want them to see the Earth destroyed”

In between Earth and Timkalak ships were battling. More and more kalanian ships came and were destroying the humans.

In the observation room looking out to the laser, the Doctor and Rose were took in to watch the end of Earth. The Doctor saw a computer at the side of the room. Obviously for controlling the laser.
“What the hell is that?” asked Rose. Looking outside at the laser.
“That is the end of your planet.” the Shadow said. He wrapped himself around their legs. Stopping them from moving. The Doctor glanced over at the controls and then glanced at the shadow. One of the kalanian light soldiers was about to push the button to fire the laser when the Doctor broke free of the shadow and dived and the controls.
“Get down Rose now.” Rose fell to the floor as the shadow flew at the Doctor and immobilised him“ let go of me.”
“shoot him.” the Shadow ordered. The light soldiers fired at the Doctor and he fell to the floor.
“NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO” Rose screamed louder than the sound of the laser building up. She grabbed the gun off on of the soldiers and shot them. The Shadow knocked her unconscious and left the room.

[Ice Warrior]

Creative.

It seems odd that it appears that it was the Doctor's actions to kill the Time Lords, but putting that aside, there seemed to be some areas where you could have expanded events in greater detail than you have given.

Would you consider this an alternate reality to that of the TV series or a part of the same timline?

[Ice Warrior]

Oh and I like the idea of the people of Timkalak being 'Shadows'!

[thevalyard01]

only the leader is a shadow all the other people are made of light. i consider this to be part of the same timeline but after the second series. if Rose leaves in the next series then it is an alternate reality. what bits could i have expanded and i'll edit the story a bit. oh and if anyone has any ideas for the story i'll try and put them in.

what did you think of my explanation as to how the time lords survived?

[Ice Warrior]

I still don't understand why the Doctor would destroy the Time Lords, but the explanation to their survival makes sense.

When I said you could have added detail, I made the assumption it would make it better. At the moment, the way you have written it works, it is straight-to-the-point, but it works. See if it were me writing it, I would try to drag it out longer and put in as much detail as I could, but still not try and make it too bulky.
Anyway I was refering to situations where they get from one place to another. Does anything eventful happen on their way to the destination? Or simply a description of their environment as they walk past it...

These are just my thoughts, keep in mind I have absolutely no experience as an author, mostly because I am 18, but anyway, I hope I have been helpful!

[thevalyard01]

i was going to cut this story down from six parts. would 3 or 4 be better?

in the episode "dalek" the doctor said he destroyed the daleks, unintentionally destroying the time lords aswell. thats the way i saw it so thats the way i put it in the story

[thevalyard01]

i cut the story down the 3 parts but might write another one. hope you like the referances at the end

The end

As the unconscious Doctor and Rose were taken back to a cell. The humans attacked the city in an attempt to stop Timkalak from destroying Earth. They destroyed buildings and the mountains around it but no luck.
"The humans are starting to destroy our city. Gather more ships and send them to Earth so we can destroying their military forces." the Shadow ordered.
" Yes Shadow lord." the light soldier ran out the room to order the attack.

On Earth millions of Kalanian ships were flying around. Looking for surviving Humans and ships. Two men with two rocket launchers jumped out of some trees behind the ruined city of London.
"you ready." asked one of them asked.
"yep" replied the other. They loaded the rocket launchers with 2 rockets each and fired them at the ships. When they made contact the explosion jumped from ship to ship destroying every one. The smoke that came from the ships blocked the sun as it came up.

The smoke from London could be seen from Timkalak. In the Doctor and Rose's sell they woke up and saw the kalanian light soldiers guarding them. On the back wall strange carvings were barely visible. They seemed to say something but the Doctor couldn't figure it out.
"Rose. Distract those guards if they look round." he said as he examined the carvings. Touching one sent a slight tingle through the room. Rose turned around to look at them and they lit up. The whole wall turned into a wall of different colours and was shaking about. The rest of the room shrunk and flew out of its place. It flew over the Kalanian city and landed in the observation room. The shadow looked on in surprise as the cell went back to its proper size. The shadow had taken on a humanoid form but still looked like a shadow.
"It looks like the Doctor has a few surprises aswell." he said. He looked out at Earth. Rose walked out of the cell and was grabbed by the light soldiers. The Doctor then appeared and saw what was going on. He looked at the laser controls and saw that it was almost ready.
"Let her go." the shadow just looked at him and didn't do anything. "I said let her go." the Doctor was getting more and more angry. He took out his sonic screwdriver only to have it hit out his hand. Rose kicked the Kalanians that were holding her and grabbed the Doctors hand. They ran at the controls. As they ran a banana fell out his pocket and landed on the floor.
"Times up." the Doctor said. Rose hit a button on the controls and the laser fired.

From Earth it looked like the sun was growing.

"Kill them." ordered the shadow. The soldiers ran at them and slipped on the banana, giving the Doctor time to change the course of the laser. He changed the path so that it hit Timkalak. They ran out of the room away to the TARDIS, dodging gunshots and soldiers trying to stop them. Smoke filled the corridor blocking their vision.
"Doctor this is hopeless." rose shouted over the noise.
"don't give up yet Rose. We can still make it back to the TARDIS."
"But we cant even see where we're going." as she finished that sentence the TARDIS materialised in front of them. The Time Lords had manoeuvred it to them so they could escape. "Forget what I said." they ran in and locked the doors. The Doctor jumped around the console pushing buttons and things to dematerialise. As the laser hit Timkalak, destroying it, the inside of the TARDIS shook around.
"Well that's that over." Rose thought to herself. Relieved.
"Where do you want to go now Rose?
"How about a holiday."
"I know this wonderful place. Its called the Eye of Orion."
"Cant we go to somewhere on Earth."
"Ok. How about Blackpool?"