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Post by jenniearcheo on Jan 1, 2007 23:38:02 GMT -5
The Roof of the World3rd paragraph"Barbara joins him, but Ian and the Doctor forces Susan to stay behind." Should be force. 19th paragraph (which begins, "The Doctor, of course,") "If the hold Khan dies before granting permission, Marco will never be able to leave in the resulting chaos." Should be old. The Singing Sands7th paragraph"whiney" should be "whinny". Horses aren't usually that whiney, unless their stalls need mucking. last paragraph"If Marco Polo water water, he shall have to reach the oasis himself..." wants Five Hundred Eyes10th paragraph"Tegana is only too glad to talk of the gift he plans to present to Noghaithe magic caravan that flies." Should probably be "Noghai: the" 15th paragraph"sending giant shadow's" remove apostraphe Rider From Shang-Tu21st paragraph (which begins, "At the stables, Tegana meets") "Kuiju wants paid in gold" Add "to be"? Assassin at Peking3rd paragraph"the Doctor reads off the tally of his winnings35 elephants with all of their trappings" Should probably be, "winnings: 35 elephants" It's a terrible shame all this was lost. Could have been lovely visuals.
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Post by boies00 on Jan 2, 2007 0:59:08 GMT -5
Corrections done. Thank!
Marco Polo is one of my favorite stories.
If you haven't seen it, the reconstruction done by Loose Cannon is extroardinary. It's likely to be the nearest we'll get to the actual story, unless the missing episodes are either animated or recovered.
Dom
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Post by jenniearcheo on Jan 2, 2007 8:14:25 GMT -5
Oh, but wouldn't it be lovely as a costume piece? Imagine the location shots. Probably made in New Zealand, of course.
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