Post by jenniearcheo on Jan 1, 2007 13:52:34 GMT -5
Okay, Dom. Thanks! ;D
The Edge of Destruction
2nd paragraph
"Susan catches sight of her grandfather lying on the floor with a gash in her head."
Mkay. Unless there's something I'm really not aware of with this show, this should be his head, right?
The Brink of Disaster
1st paragraph
"with t he addition of the Doctor's sleep drug."
delete space
4th paragraph
"Susan tries again to stop her grandfather, nothing that Ian is too ill to even stand."
noting?
19th paragraph
"The Doctor clumsily congratulates Barbara on solving the mystery - reading a patter into the ship's clues and sticking with them."
pattern?
Thanks,
Jennie
The Edge of Destruction
2nd paragraph
"Susan catches sight of her grandfather lying on the floor with a gash in her head."
Mkay. Unless there's something I'm really not aware of with this show, this should be his head, right?
The Brink of Disaster
1st paragraph
"with t he addition of the Doctor's sleep drug."
delete space
4th paragraph
"Susan tries again to stop her grandfather, nothing that Ian is too ill to even stand."
noting?
19th paragraph
"The Doctor clumsily congratulates Barbara on solving the mystery - reading a patter into the ship's clues and sticking with them."
pattern?
Thanks,
Jennie
