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Post by The Thinker on May 25, 2006 14:02:05 GMT -5
Recently dominicsmith suggested coming up with TARDISODES for classic Doctor Who stories in response to a message I had posted. Well here you can post your own potential classic series TARDISODES. Here I'll start us off with one for part One of 'An Unearthly Child':
>It's a dark November night in London. It is foggy and what can be seen is an old junkyard. A policeman is doing his rounds and he enters the junkyard. As he wanders around he spots an old Police Box. He walks up to it, sees no handle then touches it. He can feel it vibrating and here it humming and in surprise he says: "What the?!?!" He then shrugs his sholders, thinks no more of it then walks off back into the street. As he leaves a young girl in a leather hat and mini-skirt sneaks past, enters the junkyard and walks into the Police Box, looking around as if she's being watched and dissapears inside...
So what do you think then? Why don't you try and write one yourself based on this or any other episode from the classic series of Doctor Who!
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Post by Dominic Smith on May 29, 2006 12:55:09 GMT -5
The Daleks:
We see from the Dalek POV the insides of the city. Slowly they reach a control room and use a computer bank to contact another Dalek. We hear a metallic stoccata voice echoing out.
"A Thal Patrol Has Been Observed In Sector Four Of The Petrified Jungle. Prepare To Exterminate"
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Post by Dominic Smith on May 29, 2006 12:56:42 GMT -5
Survival:
The Master lands in his TARDIS on the planet of the Ceetah people. As he makes his way across the planet's surface in order to explore he is jumped by a cheetah and it bites his neck. He falls to the floor and the cheetah runs off. As he raises his head his eyes glow yellow...
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Post by Dominic Smith on May 29, 2006 12:59:53 GMT -5
Ghost Light:
A survey ship flies across the galaxy, the crew are revolting against their leader Light. He is trapped away in a container in the ships computer and his first mate takes charge, telling the others to head for Earth.
Some time later, in a Victorian house the ship lands and the first officer morphs into an insect-like creature. A creature called Nimrod enters and tells it that all is prepared, the master of the house is dead. The creature announces, it will rule the Earth as Josiah Smith
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Post by The Thinker on May 29, 2006 16:35:24 GMT -5
Here's another one from me. This is for Part One of 'Genesis of the Daleks':
> In a laboratory in an underground bunker two men are tending over their latest project in front of an audience of scientists in a dimly lit laboratory. One is tall and thin with black hair wearing a black uniform and a pair of glasses. The other is crippled and in a wheelchair, he has access only to his right arm. He speaks: "Nyder!" Nyder nods and he attaches something to the top of the machine. He steps back. The crippled scientist then flicks a switch on his high-tech wheelchair. The lights come one and the machine is revealed and is in the recognisable shape of a Dalek. The crippled scientist speaks again: "Excellent! And now we shall begin!"
What do you think?
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Post by matthewsee on Jun 14, 2006 22:25:05 GMT -5
Here's another one from me. This is for Part One of 'Genesis of the Daleks': > In a laboratory in an underground bunker two men are tending over their latest project in front of an audience of scientists in a dimly lit laboratory. One is tall and thin with black hair wearing a black uniform and a pair of glasses. The other is crippled and in a wheelchair, he has access only to his right arm. He speaks: "Nyder!" Nyder nods and he attaches something to the top of the machine. He steps back. The crippled scientist then flicks a switch on his high-tech wheelchair. The lights come one and the machine is revealed and is in the recognisable shape of a Dalek. The crippled scientist speaks again: "Excellent! And now we shall begin!" What do you think? I think it is a very good prelude for the story.
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Post by Eryx on Jun 16, 2006 7:29:11 GMT -5
If you check the YouTube site, there are quite a few fan made "Next Week...." trailers for older stories.
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Post by Dominic Smith on Jun 17, 2006 6:12:39 GMT -5
The Creature From The Pit
Erato lands on the planet Chloris where his ship begins to break up. Having survived the crash he makes his way to the palace of Princess Astra, snacking on rogue tumbleweeds as they go.
Some time after, in the dead of night Erato sits tied up at the edge of the pit, his communicator held away from him. As Astra looks on the planet's visitor is thrown into the pit where it breaks free and roams off to search its new surroundings whilst outside Astra brandishes her new emblem, Erato's communicator.
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Post by Dominic Smith on Jun 17, 2006 6:19:45 GMT -5
Time and the Rani
The Doctor and Mel are in the TARDIS, the Docotr riding his exercise bike. Suddenly there is a jolt as the ship is blasted by another craft. The Docotr has enough time to stumble to the console and realise they are being attacked and pulled into land on the planet Lyketia.
He falls to the floor and as Mel looks over him he mutters: "it's over...to sleep, per chance to dream...goodbye Mel, make sure he looks after you". He falls unconscious and Mel looks up at the console, before another attack throws her down to the ground, lifeless.
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Post by Dominic Smith on Jun 17, 2006 6:23:05 GMT -5
The Movie
The Master stands in the docks of the Dalek city, the Docotr watching from the shadows. As the Daleks sentence him to death he pleads that the Doctor take his remains back to Gallifrey and upon Dalek orders the Docotr accepts.
Placed in an extermination cage the renegade is atomised and as the Daleks place his remains in a casket the Docotr sets course for home. After picking up the small box he walks back inside the TARDIS, as ghostly voices call out to him...
"It is time..."
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Post by The Thinker on Jun 17, 2006 9:43:29 GMT -5
City of Death:
>In a mansion in the middle of Paris, a group of men and a woman are dissussing stealing the Mona Lisa from the Louvre. The meeting is adjourned and they all leave. One man goes and walks to a cellar. He walks down the steps and meets an small man in a white coat, who says that the Time apparatus has been modified, and is dismissed from the room. Once the scientist has gone the man rips off his mask and appears is this hideous green face. He chants: "Soon, I will be whole again!"
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Post by The Thinker on Jun 17, 2006 9:49:46 GMT -5
Destiny of the Daleks:
>A bunch of slaves are working at a rock face. They slave away removing rocks from an entrance. One slave tires and goes into a corner to rest, but a supivisor, a Dalek, orders him back to work. He trudges back to the rock face and continues to clear the rubble away. Meanwhile as the slaves work, on the other side of the debris is a chamber. It is dimly lit and as the view pans away from the work site a figure appears. The figure is dormant but as the angle changes the features become more obvious, it is Davros...
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Post by matthewsee on Jul 7, 2006 23:41:47 GMT -5
Revelation of the Daleks: Professor Arthur Stengos is having a walk when he is knocked unconsious by an assailant. Professor Stengos wakes up and to his horror finds he is without a body and only his head remains. The head is mutated and it is in a glass Dalek casing. Watching from a monitor is a disembodied head in a life support tank and the head is laughing uncontrollably. The head is that of Davros.
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Post by davisonera on Jul 8, 2006 3:12:44 GMT -5
Techinacally are TARDISODES allowed to include either the Doctor or his companion(s)?
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Post by The Thinker on Jul 8, 2006 4:25:14 GMT -5
Techinacally are TARDISODES allowed to include either the Doctor or his companion(s)? No one said anything about that so I assume so, yes.
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